The animation is decent enough, but the audio is not good. Now to be fair, I have no idea if this is Flash's compression or not, but I often find myself having to turn up my volume in order to hear what is being said. However, my main issue is that the "PABLO" part of the song is essentially a jumpscare. It really needs to be turned down.
please read the the first line of the authors comments/description to further understand the point and goal of this animation, thanks. Pablo is also meant to hold a surreal but also comedic value which is why it'll have moments where the audio is blasting out "PABLO" at a high volume, so if you dont fully understand this then I'd personally say this is something you won't enjoy that much and thats fully understandable
Yoo, this animation looks awesome! I shall be eargely awaiting the full release!
Thx! Happy to hear that!
This is very well done, especially for your first go. The character has so much life and expression in it!
Also, what exactly do you mean by timeline changes?
I'm still working on the details of this, but basically Glimrings can visit and travel along different timelines. If one visits for too long it risks causing a change that affects the timeline further down, or possibly causing an alternate timeline to branch off.
The audio mixing needs some work; there is a particularly bad spot near the end where the applause is too loud to be able to hear the character's dialogue. Apart from that, the animation and writing is pretty well done. I can see potential here.
First... Yeah that's what I see I forgot about the cheering (in my YouTube there's a versión with subtitles) sorry
Second the characters dialogue it's a little bad cuz' I don't have a microphone, but I will improve that and the animation.
Third, I know this have a potential, I planned several things for this, also a Lore for a season
Thnx for the advice buddy, and God bless you ❤️
Very well animated with a unique style to boot! My personal favourite is the strike one; he just looks so bored with bowling.
Thank you, I'm glad my style caught your eye! Also lol so true dude did not want to bowl
Nice animation... but what's the guy on the right doing?
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The animation here is good, but I find the progression to be a bit weird. For example, near the end, the little guy falls off of the table in one scene, but he's back on the table in the next? I also don't think it's made clear enough from the beginning that the end goal is for all of their shadows to be the same size.
All in all, a good start (especially with art style), but a lot of improvements could be made.
I fully understand what you are saying and totally agree. The animation as said was a rendering, and the whole thing was done in two days, and it played a lot on the rhythm and the absence of certain scenes including a scene where the statuette had to be mounted which was simply replaced by a fade chained (I don't know if we say like that in English, but I'm talking about the transition between this scene and the next one). I also have a lot of difficulty in having a good rhythm because this way of changing the frame given that the goal was to achieve this under a wall projection which had to try to get out of a "simple impression of projection".
But I find it very funny, because suddenly you tell me exactly the same points as what my university professor mentioned to me, but as said... Yeah if I could have had more time, I would have done something more "worked" let's say (even if I did two sleepless nights). But thank you for any message anyway, it made me really happy!
Character designer, worldbuilder, and tiny robotic cube.
England, UK
Joined on 5/24/22
Pablo: Happy times theme!!! (2005 flash animation) 
World of Strays: Intruder - Teaser Trailer 
Glimring Model Test 
Coralitoons - The Comedy Club 
Alien Invasion Bowling Set 
the waiting room 
Small size 
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