Really like the cartoony style of this. Keep it up!
Really like the cartoony style of this. Keep it up!
I do love a good bit of surrealism, and this is no exception. The wacky art style, the even wackier storyline, the live action element in the middle all worked together to keep me INVESTED. You could never really tell what was coming next, and I mean that in a good way. Nice work!
This is very well done, especially for your first go. The character has so much life and expression in it!
Also, what exactly do you mean by timeline changes?
I'm still working on the details of this, but basically Glimrings can visit and travel along different timelines. If one visits for too long it risks causing a change that affects the timeline further down, or possibly causing an alternate timeline to branch off.
The audio mixing needs some work; there is a particularly bad spot near the end where the applause is too loud to be able to hear the character's dialogue. Apart from that, the animation and writing is pretty well done. I can see potential here.
First... Yeah that's what I see I forgot about the cheering (in my YouTube there's a versión with subtitles) sorry
Second the characters dialogue it's a little bad cuz' I don't have a microphone, but I will improve that and the animation.
Third, I know this have a potential, I planned several things for this, also a Lore for a season
Thnx for the advice buddy, and God bless you ❤️
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kirby is adorable no matter how simple he is
I'm not even joking when I say that this is one of the most incredible things I've seen on this site since joining. The lineless animation style provides a distinct look; that combined with the colour palette gives the world of these characters a hazy, almost dream-like look. The writing is well thought out, with the dynamic between the three friends providing a lot of charm. The music does an excellent job at setting the mood of the scene (the track that plays in the scene with the scientists unironically bangs). Finally, without spoiling the whole thing, the plot twist is completely unexpected and leaves you wanting more. I'll definitely be sticking around for this.
Very well animated with a unique style to boot! My personal favourite is the strike one; he just looks so bored with bowling.
Thank you, I'm glad my style caught your eye! Also lol so true dude did not want to bowl
Very well done; the pencils' expressions are on point! But this begs the question...what goes on in mechanical pencil school?
I like the art style, I think it's pretty unique. Keep it up!
Character designer, worldbuilder, and tiny robotic cube. Creator of Cyril the Cylinder and Glitch & Gummi!
England, UK
Joined on 5/24/22